Recenzja filmu do sprawdzenia

Witam
To mój pierwszy post na forum ale biorąc pod uwagę że matura coming soon (angielski rozszerzony to będę się tu częściej udzielał)
Prosiłbym o sprawdzenie recenzji filmu
Dirty Harry is movie set in San Francisco in 70s. This is the first of 4 movies about inspector Harry Callahan, in this role Client Eastwood. The movie was created by Don Siegel in 1971.
The story begin when sniper kill a women from a roof. Murderer which name is scorpion want 1[tel]dollars. If major doesn’t give them the money he will kill one person every day. Callahan which are know from his fast and effective methods had to catch the killer. Scorpion fill his promises and he kidnap a girl. When Harry catch him he is torturing him because he want now where is the girl. The scorpion get free because Harry’s methods was illegal. Now he’s charging police about break the law. Harry was take off from investigation but he don’t give up.
Dirty Harry is a fantastic action movie with brilliant cast. This movie has been created 40 years ago but nowadays many young people watch it with a lot of emotions. Dirty Harry is one of the best movie in own kind. I like this movie because there aren’t too many special effect and unnecessary dialogs. This movie is in old good style, in 70s it had to be hit. My favorite quote from this movie is “Now you know why they call me "Dirty Harry". Every dirty job that comes along”
Don’t miss it. It is movie for you if you like old, good movies even if you don’t you should watched it.

Wiesz co, może byś tak najpierw sam to sprawdził - skoro się przygotowujesz do matury rozszerzonej to niemożliwe, żebyś nie wiedział co jest nie tak z np. "he don't" albo "The story begin", to są podstawowe błędy. I pamiętaj o słówkach "a" i "the"!

Ponownie proszę o sprawdzenie tekstu
Tak o a i the to wiem, a z tym don't to się machnąłem

Dirty Harry is A movie set in San Francisco in THE 70s. This is the first of
4 movies about inspector Harry Callahan, in this role PLAYED BY 'Client' (jaki to 'client' o kim TY^ tu piszesz, podstawowy blad) Eastwood.
The story 'begin' BEGINS (IT-3os.l.poj -s, dlaczewgo robisz podstawowe bledy?) when A sniper 'kill' (sniper-he-he -3os.l.poj - juz nie mam sily to samo i to samo i to samo powtarzac. Jak jest 3os.l.poj to dodajemy -s) a 'women' (women to l. mnoga, to wlasciwie ile kobiet on zabil-znowu podstawowy blad) from a roof. THE murderer 'which' (gdy piszemy o ludziach to WHOSWE name is Scorpion (a niby dlaczego imiopna wlasne maja byc mala litera?) 'want' (juz niechce tego samego powtarzxac - ale zmien to) 100,000 dollars. If THE Major doesn't give them the money he will kill one person every day. Callahan 'which' WHO 'are' (a niby dlaczego Callahanh, ktory dla mnie jest jedna osoba ma 'are' - popraw) knowN from his fast and effective methods had to catch the killer. Scorpion 'fill' (no i znowu - to jest 3os.l.poj - popraw, i naucz sie, bo sie az wsciekne) his promises and he 'kidnap' (POPRAW) a girl. When Harry catchES him he 'is torturing' (POPRAW) him because he 'want' (POPRAW) TO 'now' (zle slowo- POPRAW) where 'is the girl' (zla kol slow - the girl is). The Scorpion getS free because Harry's methods 'was' (a od kiedy dajemy czasownik l. poj do rzeczownika l. mnogiej?) illegal. 'Now he's charging police about break the law' (tego zdania to nawet nie rozumiem). Harry 'was' IS takeN off 'from' THE investigation but he 'don't give up' (a to niby po jjakiemu jest - bo to nie jest poziom osoby zdawajacej mature!!).
Dirty Harry is a fantastic action movie with A brilliant cast.
Dirty Harry is one of the best movieS 'in' OF ITS own kind. I like this movie because there 'aren't' (napisz to w calosci) too many special effectS and unnecessary 'dialogs' (ortog). This movie is in THE 'old good' GOOD OLD style, 'in' OF THE 70s SO it had to be A hit.
It is A movie for you if you like old, good movies even if you don't, you should 'watched' WATCH it.

>Now he's charging police about break the law.
He files claim against the police.

Scorpio; mayor.