bardzo bym prosiła o spr moje nieformalnego listu

Bardzo bym prosiła o spr, ponieważ obawiam się, że moja gramatyka leży i kwiczy xD Miał to być list do przyjaciela, w którym odrzucę jego zaproszenie, opiszę jak wyglądają przygotowania do świąt w moim domu oraz zaproszę go do siebie.


Dear Tom,
How are you? It was great to hear from you. Sorry, but I can't accept your invitation. This year I want to spend holidays with the family. Every year I'm helping the family in preparations. I help to clear house. I'm helping the mum to prepase a lot of festive dishes. I'm painting eggs to diffrent colours with siblings. I was wondering if you'd like to arrive to me. In my house he is ruling nice, warm und a family atmosphere. I think that well at us you would feel. I promise that I will show you my city and the most immediate surroundings. He is here a lot for seeing. Give my best wishes to the family. Anyway, I have to finisch now.
Take care,
XYZ

How are you? It was great to hear from you. Sorry, but I can't accept your invitation. This year I want to spend (przedimek) holidays with the (lepiej chyba "my") family. Every year [I'm helping...zly czas] the family WITH THE preparations. I help to clear(czy to ma byc "clean"?) (przedimek) house. [I'm helping...zly czas] the??? mum to prepase a lot of festive dishes. [I'm painting ..zly czas] eggs diffrent (orto) colours with (czyje?)siblings. I was wondering if you'd like to arrive?? (zle slowo) to me. {In my house he is ruling...kalka z polskiego] nice, warm und a family atmosphere. I think that (well WITH us you would feel...kol. slow). I promise that I will show you my city and the most immediate surroundings. He??? is here a lot for seeing (po pracuj nad tym ). Give my best wishes to the family. Anyway, I have to finish now.