W ogóle to jest całkiem niezłe. Jest parę błędów gramatycznych i pełno literówek, ale poza tym, to ok.
Literówek nie poprawiam.
>It's Dezember and will be Christimis soon so, I write letter to you,
>as allays.
...soon, so I am writing a letter....
>First, I wanted to thank ou for gift lasy year
...for my gifts
This books was really
>interesing.
THAT book
Thank you so much because
>that presents was so useful.
....those presents WERE (uważaj na liczby pojedyncze i mnogie - ma się wszystko zgadzać!)
>This Christmas I really want to mp4.
...want to receive an mp4.
I love hearing a rock music, so
>my mum is wery angry when I hear it in house.
I love listening to rock music and my mom.....when I listen to it in the house.
I want they have a
>great christmas.
I want THEM to have ....