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People did not always have a permanent place to residence. They led a nomadic existence depend on climatic conditions and food availability. With dynamic growth of agriculture and economy they began to establish settlements, villages and finally the cities.
Sometimes it is said that one of the task of real man is to build a house. We can’t take this literally, but owning a house is measure of some kind of success. When we decide to make a family we’re looking for beautiful and peaceful place to live.
For everyone “home” has a different meaning. Some would be satisfy with block of flats, some with detached house and some with villa with pool. But all these types of houses have something in common. First of all home is a place where you can always come back and take some rest after hard day.
Home is not always a building. For some people it is compare to happy family and peaceful life. A place where they feels safe and can do whatever they want.
But not everyone has a house. In poverty countries people still leads a nomadic life, they lives in huts and shelters. In developed countries we can spot a lot of homeless people. Sometimes this is their own choice but mostly they failed with life.
For me house is a place where I could always come back. Where my family would always be. In the future I would live on detached house with garden, far away from city centre.

People did not always have a permanent place 'to' (zle slowo, tu ma byc OF) residence. They led a nomadic existence (tu brakuje slowa) 'depend' (zla czesc mowy) on climatic conditions and food availability.
Sometimes it is said that one of the 'task' (ale przeciez 'one of' daje mi znac, ze tu ma byc l. mn) of (przedimek) real man is to build a house. We can't take this literally, but owning a house is (przedimek) measure of some kind of success. When we decide to 'make' (nie, niestety nikt nie moze 'make a family' tylko HAVE) a family we're looking for (przediumek - co to z tymi przedimkami jest- dlaczego hj ich nie uzywasz? one nie sa dla ozdoby) )beautiful and peaceful place to live.
Some would be 'satisfy' (zla czesc mowy) with (przedimek) block of flats, some with detached house and some with (przedimek) villa with (przedimek) pool. First of all (przedimek) home is a place where you can always come back
and take some rest after (przedimek) hard day.
For some people it is 'compare' (zla czesc mowy) to (przedimek) happy family and peaceful life. A place where 'they feels' (od kiedy do l. mn dajemy czasowniki 3os.l.poj?) safe and can do whatever they want.
In 'poverty' (zle slowo) countries people still 'leads' (znowu to, do l. mn rzeczownikow dajemy czasowniki odpowiednie do l. mn - a nie do 3os.l.poj)
a nomadic life, 'they lives' (popraw i nie rob takich podstawowych bledow) in huts and shelters.
Sometimes this is their own choice but mostly they failed 'with' (ciekawe pojecie daje to 'with' tutaj, ale lepiej napisz IN) life.
For me (przedimek) house is a place where I could always come back.
In the future I would live 'on' ('na' no ciekawa jestem jak, tutaj ma byc IN) (a gdzie przedimek? poszedl sobie na spacerek?) detached house with (przedimek) garden, far away from (przedimek) city centre.