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Write a story beginning with the words: He sat down, unable to believe what had happened.


He sat down, unable to believe what had happened. Last year David had decided to take part in some lottery. He could win one million dollars. But he knew that it was unlikely to win, so he quickly had forgotten about it. Two days later, he had watched Tv information and the speaker said that they are looking for a winner of lottery. It turned out that it was he who had won. In less than half a year he had changed his all life diametrically. He had bought new house with modern equipment and with beautiful garden. Also he bought two sports cars. He begun to meet with rich people and to organized sumptuous banquets. He thought that he was the happiest man in the world. But hapinness did not last long. David immidiatly spend his money, mainly for less important things. Suddenly he had noticed that he had not had any friends. He started feel lonley.
He sat down, unable to believe what had happened. There was a time when he was happy without money. And now he had neither money nor friends. He decided to chande it. He went to work and meet some people. Now he knows that money is not everything.

Last year David had decided to take part in 'some' (lepiej napisz 'A') lottery.
But he knew that 'it' (David to 'it' - od kiedy? popraw) was unlikely to win, so he quickly 'had forgotten' FORGOT about it. Two days later, he 'had' (nie rozumiem po co to?) watched Tv 'information' (zle slowo - generalnie to 'news') (albo 'watched the news on TV) and the 'speaker' (nie, w TV mamy 'news announcers' albo 'announcer') said that they 'are' WERE looking for 'a' THE winner of (tu brakuje przedimka) lottery.
In less than half a year he had changed his 'all' (zle slowo - pomysl co jest 'calym') life diametrically. He 'had' (niepotr) bought (a gdzie przedimek?)new house with modern equipment and with (a gdzie przedimek?) beautiful garden.
He begAn to meet with rich people and to organized sumptuous banquets.
But 'hapinness' (ortog) did not last long. David 'immidiatly' (ortog) spend (tu brakuje slowa) his money, mainly 'for' ON (you spend your money ON things) less important things. Suddenly he 'had' (niepotr) noticed that he 'had not had' DID NOT HAVE any friends. He started (tu cos brakuje) feel 'lonley' (ortog).
He decided to 'chande' (ortog) it. He went to work and 'meet' (to ma byc w czasie przeszlym) some people.

Dobrze.

Czy 'diametrically' rzeczywiscie tu pasuje?

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Is fashion important?

Nowadays everyone wants to look gorgeous and of course it depends to how we are getting dress. So we go to the shop to buy expensive clothes and we spend all the money on it. But is it the most important thing in our live to wear the most fashionable clothes?
There are both some advantages and disadvantages. First of all people wants to look good, because everyone likes to be complimented. Someone once said "What you wear is what you are" or something like that. Reffering to this sentence people think that they will be better treated if they wear designer clothes. Another proof to confirm the fact that fashion is very important is that people wants to attract the attention. They think that if they wear something extravagant they are more noticable. In this way they can for example make a new friend.
Comparing to this facts I thing that fashion is not such important thing in our life. Very often fashion is very strange and when we see the model on the catwalk we will say "Oh my God who normally will dress it". Moreover trendy clothes are very expensive and are not good species. Besides, it is not imposed from above that we must wear this type of clothes. Each has its own style and everyone wants to look original.
In conclusion I think that fashion is not such important thing in our life. More important is who we are, our behaviour and our relationship with other people. everyone should wear want they wanted to wear.

Nowadays everyone wants to look gorgeous and of course it depends to how 'we are getting dress' (tego nie rozumiem - 'dress' to chyba tutaj jakas sukienka?). So we go to the shop to buy expensive clothes and we spend all the money on 'it' (ale przeciez 'clothes' to l. mnoga - dostosuj). But is it the most important thing in our 'live' (tutaj potrzebujesz rzeczownik a nie jak napisales czasownik) to wear the most fashionable clothes?
There are both some advantages and disadvantages (ale do czego - musisz napisac). First of all people 'wants' (people to l. mnoga - dostosuj czasownik) to look good, because everyone likes to be complimented (ale nad czym?) . Someone once said "What you wear is what you are" or 'something like that' (nie!! jak juz uzywasz slowa, to prosze cytuj poprawnie..ma byc..'You are what you wear') .' Reffering' (ortog) to this sentence people think that they will be better treated if they wear designer clothes. Another proof 'to confirm' (inaczej, tutaj CONFIRMING) the fact that fashion is very important is that people 'wants' (dostosuj czasownik do 'people') to attract 'the' (niepotr) attention.
Comparing to 'this' (ale przeciez 'facts' to l. mn - dostosuj) facts I 'thing' (calkowicie zle slowo) that fashion is not such AN important thing in our life. Very often fashion is very strange and when we see the model on the catwalk we will say "Oh my 'God' (prosze nie uzywac takich slow-dla niektorych to jest obrazajace) who 'normally will dress it' (zla kol slow - popraw). Moreover trendy clothes are very expensive and are 'not good species' (tego to nawet nie rozumiem) .
Each (tutaj cos brakuje) has 'its' (zle slowo, ponizasz ludzi do 'it') own style and everyone wants to look original.
In conclusion I think that fashion is not such AN important thing in our life.
Everyone should wear 'want' (nie rozumiem uzycia tego slowa tutaj) they 'wanted' WANT to wear.

Working while studying.

Working and studying two things which are equally important in our lives. We learn to get a good job in the future and we work to earn money on our courent issues. But is it possible to combine these two things?
Today it is very popular that young people work and learn at the same time. They need their own cash and they want to be more independent. Sometimes they must pay for their school and they want to relieve their parents. Also they have more extra money for their own expenses. It is good, because they appreciate the value of money, they recognize that everything costs and nothing is for free.
On the other hand, young people have not any free time to meet with their friends or simply to learn something. And they often have bad grades in school or they do not go to the classes.
Maybe it is better to work when you study evening classesfor for example in the weekend, because you have more time to learn and to organizes other things to do. First, we need to get a good education and tahn we will have satisfactory job.
To sum up, in my opinion working and studying at the same time is difficult to conect. I know that all of us want to have their own money, but there is a time for everything. We should enjoy our youth and go to work for example in the summer time.

Working and studying (tu cos brakuje) two things which are equally important in our lives. We 'learn' (ale wczesniej mowisz o 'studying'- learning to jest cos innego w tym sensie) (tu cos brakuje) to get a good job in the future and we work to earn money ''on' (napewno to jest zle) our 'courent' (ortog) issues' (nie rozumiem co masz na mysli on our current issues - co to ma byc?). But is it possible to combine 'these' (tylko nie jest jasno o czym mowisz 'o money i job'?) two things?
Today it is very 'popular' (nie za trafne slowo, ale ok, chociaz mozesz napisac 'common') that young people work and 'learn' (uzywaj slowo 'study' bo na Uni 'you study') at the same time. They need their own cash and they want to be more independent (od kogo? czego?). Sometimes they must pay for their 'school' (za szkole np podstawowke czy liceum sie przeciez nie placi - uzywaj 'University') and they want to relieve their parents (od czego?). Also (tutaj brakuje pare slow) they have 'more extra' (nie tak - nie mozesz to tak laczyc, napisz 'extra') money for their own expenses. 'It' (nie za bardzo wiem do czego to 'it sie odnosi - chyba myslisz, ze jak zarobia to wiedza 'value'-napisz to inaczej) is good, because THEN they appreciate the value of money, they recognize that everything costs and nothing is for free.
On the other hand, young people have not GOT any free time to meet with their friends or simply to 'learn' (nie uzywaj tego, bo np. moge powiedziec, I want to learn to dance - czy to jest to o czym mowisz- staraj uzywac formalne i celowe slowa) something. And they often have bad grades in 'school' (zmien) or they do not go to 'the' (niepotr) 'classes' (na Uni nie mowimy 'classes' poszukaj i popraw).
Maybe it is better to work when you 'study evening classes' (to jest kalka z polskiego bo tlumaczysz slowo w slowo - nie rob tak, to wg mnie znaczy cos innego-popraw) for example 'in' (popraw) the weekend, because you have more time to 'learn' (zmien) and to 'organizes' (zmien - czasownik MUSI byc dostosowany do rzecz.) other things to do. First, we need to get a good education and 'tahn' (ortog) we will have (a gdzie przedimek?) 'satisfactory' (nie za trafne slowo- poszukaj inne) job.
To sum up, in my opinion working and studying at the same time is difficult to 'conect' (ortog, ale i tak to jest zle slowo, dlaczego tlumaczysz z slownikiem w rece - ja to czuje, prosze tego nie robic). I know that all of 'us' (nie moizesz uzywac 'us' bo to odnosi sie tez do mnie - musisz napisac dokladnie o kim mowa) want to have their own money, but there is a time for everything. 'We' (a w jaki sposob ja sie moge domyslec, ze ty tez jestes studentem?) should enjoy our youth and 'go to work' (zmien to - na wiecej formalne slowa) for example in the summer time.