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Today each of us have a mobile phone, a copmuter and many others devices. We think that we can find everything in the internet but in my opinion the most important things we should learn from our grandparents and parents so today I would like to tell you about it.

Grandparents are full of wisdom to share with younger generations.We can learn from Them history about the Great Depression or World War II.Personal stories are much easier to remember than lists of names and dates from books.Don’t sweat the small stuff because we have to be strong and believe in yourself.Their the past was more difficult and They didn't had any facilities.Our parents can learn us about an unconditionnal love.For example my parents have been together for 38 years. Today many marriages end in divorce because Their are not ready to get married.

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Today each of us have a mobile phone, a copmuter and many others devices. We think that we can find everything in the internet but in my opinion the most important things we should learn from ___ our grandparents and parents so today I would like to tell you about it.
Grandparents are full of wisdom to share with younger generations.We can learn from Them history about the Great Depression or World War II.Personal stories are much easier to remember than lists of names and dates from books.Don’t sweat the small stuff because we have to be strong and believe in yourself.Their *the* past was more difficult and They didn't had any facilities.Our parents can learn us about an *unconditionnal* love.For example my parents have been together for 38 years. Today many marriages end in divorce because Their are not ready to get married.
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Today each of us has a mobile phone, a computer and many others devices. We think that we can find everything in the internet but in my opinion the most important things we should learn from the our grandparents and parents so today I would like to tell you about it.

Grandparents are full of wisdom to share with younger generations.We can learn from them history about the Great Depression or World War II.Personal stories are much easier to remember than lists of names and dates from books.Don’t sweat the small stuff because we have to be strong and believe in ourself.Their past was more difficult and they didn't have any facilities.Our parents can us learn about an unconditional love.For example my parents have been together for 38 years. Today many marriages end in divorce because they are not ready to get married.


''can learn us about "- chodzi o szyk ?

okej, już wiem , że będzie inny czasownik

Don’t sweat the small stuff nie wiem co tu chcesz powiedzieć więc nie mam opinii. Powtórz sobie zaimki bo robisz byki np tu:
We can learn from them history...

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let me put it this way : we can learn ( a lot ) from their history , we can learn a lot from theirs ..about their ...itd

We think that we can find everything 'in' (ja jakos lubie 'on') the internet but in my opinion the most important things we should learn from 'the' (a co to jest?) our grandparents and parents 'so' (are..........) today I would like to tell you about 'it' (nie rozumiem do czego to sie odnosi, bo jak do 'things' to l.mn).

We can learn from them (brak przedimka) history 'about' (zle slowo, tutaj 'of') the Great Depression or World War II.
Don’t sweat (tu brak slowa) the small stuff because we have to be strong and believe in 'ourself' (zle slowo, tutaj 'ourselves').Their past was more difficult and they didn't have any facilities (ale jakich? bo 'facilities' to w BrE jest toaleta/wc, a to chyba istnialo nawet przed WWII). Our parents can 'us' (w zlym miejscu) 'learn' (zle slowo, ...a teacher teaches, a student learns) about 'an' (niepotr) unconditional love.
Today many marriages end in divorce because 'they' (nie wiem do kogo to sie odnosi) are not ready to get married.