bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie (dialog )

Rozmowa z kolegą o wyborze filmu na który macie zamiar pójść
1. kolega odrzuca twoja propozycje obejrzenia horroru
2. proponujesz inny film
3 proponujesz kompromis

Jestem w 1 klasie LO

Hello Mark
Hi Adam
A: Tomorrow is Saturday, would you like to go somewhere?
M: Why not
A: Maybe we will go to the cinema ??
M: That is a great idea , what's on at the cinema?
A: Tomorrow is premiere of saw three in the cinema, maybe we will go on this ??
M: Oh no, I don't like films as " Saw" I think horrors films are boring
A: hmmmm.... what you will tell on this movie "The Lord of the Rings"??
M: I don't like fantasy films too
A: Oh my god... so what kind of films you like ??
M: I like Sincefiction films like Star Trek , Stargate
A: Ok so let's go on this Star gate deal??
M: Ok deal
A: About what time this film is?
M: About 18.45, come to me about 18 this we will go out together.
A: Ok I will be

często siępisze zamiast "would you go" - "do you fancy go" wydaje mi się że druga wersja jest lepsza.what you will tell on this movie.zamiast tego bedzie lepsze "what do you think about this movie..."so what kind of films you like ?zapomniałeś o "do""czyli bedzie so what kind of films do you like.About what time this film is? zamiast tego bedzie lepiej:what time do they show this film? albo "at what time is this flm?" no to tyle z takich rzeczy ktore zauwazyłam że są do poprawy.nie wiem czy to wszystko.ale popraw chociaż tyle;).

wielkie dzięki Gosiu

chyba "do you fancing goING"

do you fancy going

pomylilam sie, sorry :)