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proszę o sprawdzenie bo tutaj na pewno jest masa błędów(sorki) bo mam problemy z angielskim ( niecierpie go) miała to być historyjka na podstawie 4 obrazków urzywając past simple i past continous

1. Last summer bob and anna went camping in France.
2. When they arrived for village the sun was shining and it was warm.
3. First they visited to castle.
4. After that they went on dinner for resturant near main square.
5. Then they ate dinner weather was changed.
6. When Bob and Anna arrived to campsite it was rained(raining) and windied(windy)
7. Anna and Bob tried to puted up tent but it was too windy.
8. They went to slept in car.

>bo mam problemy z angielskim ( niecierpie go)

Nie mas zproblemów a znaigelskim ale ze sobą :-)
Patrząc na to, co napisałaś, nie jest źle. Kilka błędów, w tym jeden taki, którego nigdy byś nie zrobiła po polsku. Zaraz się przekonasz.

1. Last summer bob and anna went camping in France. ok
2. When they arrived for village the sun was shining and it was warm.
arrive do jakiegoś większego miejsca 'in', a do mniejszego miejsca to 'at'
3. First they visited bez przyimka brak przedimka castle. Komentarz: mówi się 'visit something', stąd 'to' było niepotrzebne. Z drugiej strony castle jest poiczalny (jeden zamek, dwa zamki itp.) i przed nim musi stać przedimek, myslę, że nieokręslony, bo to nie jest zamek, o którym wcześniej wspominałaś.
4. After that they went TO HAVE (poszli zjeść) dinner for

teraz jest dobrze? NIE JESTEM PEWNA TEGO 4 ZDANIA czy dobrze je poprawiłam
1. Last summer Bob and Anna went camping in France.
2. When they arrived in village the sun was shining and it was warm.
3. First they visited an castle.
4. After that they went have dinner in resturant near the main square.
5. When they ate dinner weather changed.
6. When Bob and Anna arrived at campsite it was raining and windy
7. Anna and Bob tried to put up tent but it was too windy.
8. They went to sleep in car.

Brak kilku przedimków

1. Last summer Bob and Anna went camping in France.
2. When they arrived in A village the sun was shining and it was warm.
3. First they visited a castle. (AN PRZED SAMOGLOSKAMI)
4. After that they went TO have dinner in A restAurant near the main square.
5. When they ate dinner, THE weather changed.
6. When Bob and Anna arrived at THE campsite it was raining and windy
7. Anna and Bob tried to put up A tent but it was too windy.
8. They went to sleep in THE car.

Dziękuję za pomoc :)