Witam, własnymi siłami spróbowałem przetłumaczyć streszczenie do pracy magisterskiej. Bardzo proszę, żeby ktoś rzucił na to okiem, z góry dziękuję :)
The thesis contains four chapters...
This looks like an attempt at writing an overview of content.
Putting aside the English language issues, in this overview I can’t see any references to the key parts of the paper that must be referred to in a content overview; the reader might want to know where to find
[*] background information (what we know, how things are today: this is where you started)
[*] purpose of the study (why you did what you did)
[*] focus of the paper (what is your special interest in all of this, matters that you decided to ponder)
[*] your observations and conclusions
Whoever is going to read your thesis will read the abstract, introduction, and conclusion chapters first—most likely in this order—before delving into the main body of the text. Most of thesis readers never last past the abstract if it’s inconsiderate of the reader.
The thesis abstract can be the most important piece of writing that you will ever do in your life time. You’d better start from scratch.