FCE Writing

Everton, April 25, 2006

Dear Mrs Kate Ashby,

I am writing to you because I would like to apply for the job in Green Pepper Cafe which I saw advertised in a newspaper.

I am 19 years old and I have just finished high school. I have been working in Red’s Milk Bar as a waiter during last summer, so I know various kinds of food. In high school I have been working as a volunteer in school charity organization, so in my opinion I am a kind, friendly person and I have got good communication skills. I have a reasonable command of English, German and Polish. I am not going to study for next year, so full time job is not a problem for me.

I think I would be a suitable candidate for this position because I enjoy working with people very much. Furthermore I have got a good qualifications, well-developed skills and my previous employers can recommend me.

I am able to provide references. I am available to attend an interview whenever you wish. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Prosiłbym uprzejmie o sprawdzenie. Z góry dziękuję.

wg mnie-
Dlaczego Mrs Kate Ashby, - albo Dear Kate, jak sie kogos dobrze zna, albo Dear Mrs Ashby, - i na koniec - Yours sincerely.

...I am writing to you...(po co ten poczatek zdania - przeciez widac, ze piszesz) czy nie lepiej zaczac - I would like to apply for the job in ...

I have been working as a waiter....- a moze - During last summer I worked as a waiter.....so I am familiar with various kinds of foods.

...so in my opinion...(ja to widze ze po prostu masz 'high opinion of yourself') - moze lepiej - I feel that I am a kind, friendly.....

*I am not going to study for next year....lepiej - I have decided not to study next year (nie trzeba 'for') albo - ...decided not to continue my studies next year
...a good qualification albo good qualifications...