Ja wiem, że tego jest dużo, ale prosiłabym o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów, bo muszę to mieć na jutro. Błędów nie powinno być dużo, z góry dziękuję :) Przepraszam za problem, jest to druga część opowiadania o pisarzu, którą już tu wcześniej wkleiłam i została sprawdzona. Dlatego zaczyna się od 'when'. Dziękuję z góry :)
When he went back to the bench he noticed that an old man was standing close it and put something on the bench’s board. This man had got black cat on leash, grey coat and grey hat. When he came closer he sighted that this ‘something’ was a small bunch of field flowers binded with ribbon.
‘Why are you doing it?’ James asked, but an old man just looked at him and without saying any words, turned back and went somwhere pulling his pet. And, in a moment, he disappeard behind big rock.
On the next day James decided to go for the same walk to the same place. How shocked was he, when he saw the same old man who put on the bench new bunch of flowers. James ran up to this old man, and asked ‘Who was Juliette?! I’m young writer and I must write book! I’ve got only two months...! Please!’ but the man just looked on James and went away.
‘If you don’t tell me now, I’ll be coming here everyday!’ James shouted.
And next day he came back there how he promissed. But on the bench a new bunch was put already. He sat on bench all day, but the man didn’t come. On next day was the same. And after week James, who didn’t believe that he’ll see the man whenever, came on the cliff. And he saw an old man! He came up to the man and excused for his terrible behaviour. An old man smiled to him and asked
‘You really want to know who was Juliette?’
James said yes.
‘So I’ll tell you all of the story’
‘Every dog has its day’ – James though and took his pencil and a sheet of paper and started to write everything he heard.