please, help me

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Mam do napisania list z wakacji do rówieśnika z Irlandii(120-150słow):
*napisz z kim spędzasz wakacje i opisz towarzyszące Ci osoby
*opisz miejsce, w ktorym sie znajdujesz i opowiedz,jak spedzasz czas
*wspomnij, otym jaka jest pogoda i jak w zwiazku z tym musisz sie ubierac
*napisz kiedy wracasz i popros o odpowiedz na swoj list
Dear Suse,
How are you doing? How is summer in Irland? Have you passed your driving test yet?
I'm in Croatia. I've been in Split since last Friday. I'm here with my family. My dad and my brother-Tom are so excited that they can swimm in Adriatic, my mother often heat on the beach, and my little sister-Victoria is very happy, because she may be make a cakes of sand.
Split is a wonderful city, there is many great's museums, exclusive restaurants and fantastic buildings. We're staying at a lovely house with a beautiful view of the sea. The beach is just next to my house, so I can go there every day. Can you belive that? Yesterday I visited a amazing palace and Medjugorie Mountain. Tonight we're having a barbeque and tomorrow morning we're leaving for Isla Hvar. I'm so excited! I've been waiting for the whole year to come here and go scuba-diving.
The weather is good. It's a little bit too hot for me but I know I will have a great time, therefor I must dressed a bikini and hut.
Well, I have to go now. I will be come back next Sunday. Write back soon.
Lots of Love,
XYZ
Z gory Wilkie Dzięki za pomoc!
Proszę Was mam to na jutro , anie wiem czy jest poprawnie napisane. Błagam Was!!!Będe bardzo wdzięczna!
Jest tu kto??? Bardzo bardzo bardzo prosze Was o sprawdzenie!!!
How is summer in IrEland?
My dad and my brother Tom are so excited that they can swim (jeden 'm') in THE Adriatic, my mother often 'heat on the beach' (niewiem co to jest - sunbathes?), and my little sister Victoria is very happy, because she CAN make 'a cakes of sand' (make sandcastles).
..there is (is jest l. poj) many (jest l. mnoga) great's (dlaczego great's) wystarczy great) museums...
Can you belive (BELIEVE - naucz sie tego 'I before E except after C' believe, receive itp) that? ...
...a amazing palace and THE Medjugorie Mountain. Tonight we're having a
barbeCue and tomorrow...
...thereforE I must GET dressed IN a bikini and hAt (hut znaczy cos innego).
Na drugi raz, to moze troszeczke wczesniej zrob zadanie, wtedy bedziesz mogla isc spac spokojnie.
Dzięki Terri:D Nawet nie wiesz jak bardzo mi pomogłaś;)
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